Monday, May 24, 2010

Generals - Original

Generals

Generals
Cunning, Conniving
Assaulting, Defending, Besieging
Live for glorious wars
Warlords

This poem is a cinquain about generals. It describes them not just as the valiant people they are on the surface, but also as the shady schemers away from the public. Line 3 describes what the three forms of battle that a proper general must master. The last line “warlords” describes what great generals end up becoming; rather than serving a master, they begin to garner power for themselves, eventually becoming rulers in their own rights.
There are not many literary devices used in this poem, due to its length. Line 2 has alliteration of the hard “c” sound, and line 3 has assonance of the “ee” sound.
This fits the theme of war because generals are, of course, an integral driving force behind wars.

2 comments:

  1. I like your portrayal of both the evil and goodness of generals. The transition from a general to a warlord immediately reminded me of Cao Cao, an infamous leader who was once the most trusted councilor of the emperor.

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  2. Although this poem is short and as you said, not filled with literary devices, I thought that this poem was effective in explaining the multi-faceted characters of generals. Being quite restrictive, cinquains are quite difficult to write, but I thought you did a great job on this one.

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